Goonland

Hoooooooooo boy. This took a while. Two weeks to be exact.

Basically I'm just trying to figure out what's "appropriate" for comicking, as far as panel layout and shading and everything goes. Not much background, I'm afraid, perspective still scares me. *lame* I don't have any tone paper either, so this was all done by hand. (Emphasis ALL. D: ) I need to learn more about that too. If anybody has any critiques or advice about any part of this, please tell me! I want to improve. (Hope it's easy to read, I tried to make my handwriting nice...!)

Poor emo Leo. I shaded his face badly and it looks like he has a fever. *hug* I love the bottom half of the page though. Especially panel three. (And four. <3) The first two panels wouldn't cooperate, shamey shamey. I forgot how long Raph's arm was and that's why his punching bag is entirely in-panel and he's half-out.

And no, the fact that the title refers to a certain black-and-white cartoon is not a coincidence.

TMNT (c) Mirage Studios.